Assignment 01.07 Alternate Plot Structures

Hernandez 1English 2 – 1.07Rapunzel re-writeOriginal by Grimm’s Fairy TalesFlash Forward“Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair to me” said the prince not knowing what was waiTng for him at the top… as he climbed he was anxious to see Rapunzel once again, he looked up and saw the enchantress staring into his eyes with so much rage. “How dare you call to Rapunzel, how dare you! Nowyou will wonder around in darkness for as long as you live!” Her nails grew before his eyes, as she lounged towards him. Earlier±here were once a man and a woman who had long in vain wished for a child. At length the woman hoped that God was about to grant her desire. ±hey had a li²le window in the room upstairs from which a splendid garden could be seen, which was full of the most beauTful Fowers and herbs. It was, however,surrounded by a high wall, and no one dared to go into it because it belonged to an evil enchantress, who had great power and was dreaded by all the world. One day the woman was standing by this window and looking down into the garden, when she saw a bed which was planted with the most beauTful rampion (Rapunzel), and it looked so fresh and green that she longed for it.Parallel Plot- Woman’sPOVI couldn’t help it ever since I saw those rampions I couldn’t quit thinking about it I Tred and one day my husband saw how miserable and sick I was ge³ng. Alarmed for my health he asked: ‘What ails you, dear

The two techniques that I used in this assignment is flash back and flash forward. I used flashback in my version of the fairytale “Hansel and Gretel” by mentioning in the story words like “remember” for example; “Hansel just remembered that before they left the witches home, he brought loads of gold for the family.” I wrote that in my story because I mentioned that Hansel just had a flshback about how he stole gold from the witches candy house. I also used flashforward in the story by using by saying “While Gretel was doing the chores, she imagined ahead of time that the evil witch would try her best to trick her into doing something to her.” This shows that Gretel was already thinking ahead of time that the evil witch would try to do something to her just like she did to Hansel. There are two examples in the story how I was able to use Flashback and flashforward.

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